you sit there rubbing my leg
making it seem like there's nothing wrong
... when everything is wrong.
You are HER boyfriend
NOTHING can make this right.
And I was going to express all the things i feel
But that was the day you and her became the couple
the day you said you'd never been happier
BUT IT'S WRONG
All of our friends feel uncomfortable
All of our group know
Except her
You hold ME not HER
You clutch my hand
AND IT'S WRONG
The worst part of it is
everytime i see you my heart stops,
and everytime you hold me against you
i feel pure bliss
at peace
like the most beautiful girl in the world
you are one of my greatest friends
we understand each other
and i would be lying if i said that
she didn't seem happier when she's not around you
but until you and her are through
you will never know
how much i have loved you
and how i am dying inside
Anonymous
07:49:23 PM
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am I the only person who found it amusing that this passage started with "you sit there rubbing my leg"...
^no.
^^
Nope.
Hmm... I didn't think it was funny per se... I actually thought it was a strong way to begin the passage, indicating the feel of the entire situation.
Though I'm pretty sure this post should have been in prose.
all i know is that person is hurting.
no.
i kinda laughed... then cryed
All unrhymed poetry is is prose put into stanzas, graffiti. I don't see the difference.
^
Sorry, but structure must have meaning, for that is part of what makes literary analysis worthwhile.
But I suppose, for you, this is a moot point.
Im glad we are here to discuss how "amusing" or "poetic" this persons problems are..
On the contrary, this site is for whatever anybody wants to talk about.
It is, initially, for posting issues.. but there is no censorship on what is up for discussion.
There's no law against douchebaggery either, but we all hate that.
agreed.
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