Sunday, October 22, 2006

it is
funny
how
the person you most
adore
can
be responsible
for all your happiness
or
be the
assassin
of your
heart.


Anonymous
10:51:41 PM

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

funny is the wrong word, ironic maybe?

Such is the way of Love.

Anonymous said...

yeah, it's like with one word they can make your stomach fall through and you're back to square one and sometimes you wish you weren't there for them but yet you don't know what you'd do without them.

a lot of people have this... similairity.

Anonymous said...

oooh...well said.

Mine turned into an assassin, so why do i still want him?

Anonymous said...

true dat

Anonymous said...

it is
funny
how
the fewer words
per line
there are
in
your poem
and the less
punctuation
you use
the more
sharp
cold
empty
angst
you convey.

or maybe
you just want
to
take up
space
on the main
page.

(I apologize for my rudeness, but your poem begged a response like this)